Tim Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog the only thing you need to add is the keynote presentation. Research into the newspaper club or the english and media centre. Include screengrabs and images of your research. 

Tara Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, the only thing that needs to be sorted out is the settings on your blog. 

Sam Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make: 

1) Your keynote presentation is missing. Research into the newspaper club or the english and media centre. Include images and screengrabs of your research.

2) Include screengrabs of the emails that you recieved from people.

3) Action plans should be added. Also be reflective. How well do you think you worked this week?

4) Draft article should be added onto the blog.

5) Include screengrabs of the feedback that you have recieved on your article.

6) Dave's session notes are also missing. These need to be added.

7) Include the final draft of your article. 

Philippa Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you should make:

1) The settings need to be changed so that all your blog posts fit on the one page.

2) You should be more reflective in your action plans. How well do you think you worked this week? Are there any improvements you think you could make when working next week? 

Matt L Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, the only thing that needs adding is the action plans for each of the weeks. Be reflective in your blog. How well do you think you have worked that week? Also, Dave's session notes are still missing?

Matt H Feedback 2

Having looked through your blog, these are the changes that you will need to make:

1) You need to change the settings on your blog so that all your blog posts can be seen on the one page.

2) Your action plans need to be more detailed. Daily updates would be useful and be reflective. How well do you think you have worked this week? Do you think you could have worked better?

3) Keynote presentation missing. Research into the Newspaper club or the english and media centre. Include screengrabs and images of your research.

4) Include an image of the article that you looked at. An annotated version would also be good.

5) Include the first draft of your article.

6) Include screengrabs of the feedback you recieved. What changes are you going to make from them?

7) Final draft of your article should also be put on the blog. 

8) Dave's session notes should also be included. For example, the flatpack designs etc

Loz Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make:

1) Your blog post settings need to be changed so they all fit onto one page, not two.

2) The first draft of your article is missing

3) Include annotated screen grabs of the different articles you looked at. Also talk about the different ideas you had for your own article.

4) Include a screengrab of the feedback you recieved on your first draft of the article. Talk about the improvements you need to make.

5) Your keynote presentation is also missing. Research into the newspaper club or the English and Media centre, include screengrabs and images of your research.

6) Action Plans 1,2,3,4 are missing. These need to be added with reflections. How well do you think you worked this week? What could you improve upon for next week?

7) Dave's session notes are also missing. For example, flatpacks etc

Kirk Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, there are no changes that you need to make at this time.

James Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make:

1) Your keynote presentation is missing. Research the newspaper club or the english and media centre, include images and screengrabs of your research.

2) The assigned roles blog post should be changed. It shows you have been copying from other people's blogs. eg: You did not write an article with Matt. Tara did.

3) Action plans 2,3,4 are missing. Be reflective at the end of each week, how well do you think you worked? Could you have worked better?

Hayden Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make:

1) Your keynote presentation is missing. Research into the newspaper club or the English and Media centre, include screengrabs/images of your research.

2) Your action plans need to be more detailed. Do daily updates, not just an overview of the week. Also, be reflective, talk about how well you think you have worked or is there a way you could work better?

3) Include a screengrab of the feedback you recieved on your article.

4) Possibly take a screengrab of your article in the template design that you made?

5) Also, did you help design the newspaper flyer? If so, do a blog post on this and include a screengrab of the final thing.

6) Tag your posts so that they are easier to find. For example, action plans etc

Dave Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make.

1) The first draft of your article is missing

2) Take Screengrabs of the feedback you recieved on your article and talk about the improvements you need to make for your next draft.

3) The keynote presentation is missing. Research into the newspaper club or the English and Media centre. Include images / screengrabs of your research.

4) Notes on the style guide sessions are also missing.

5) With your action plans, you could include include reflections on how well you have worked during that week and if there is anything you could do to work better the following week.

Ash Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog so far, here is a list of things that need to be added:

1) Action Plan 1 needs finishing, also give reflections at the end of the week saying how well you worked and what you can do to improve the following week.

2) Your keynote presentation is missing. Research either the newspaper club or the English and Media centre, make sure you include screengrabs/images of your research.

3) Proof of research for your article - screengrabs of websites you visited for information, articles that you read.

4) Use images from each of the sessions to help illustrate what went on in the lessons.

5) Action plans 2, 3, 4 missing. These need to be done.

6) First draft of your article is missing

7) Dave's session on flatpacks is missing.

8) Screengrabs / photos of feedback on your article, talk about what you think of the feedback and where you will go from here.

9) Include the final draft of your article.

Alie Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, everything seems to be in order, apart from these.

1) When you interviewed the level 3's, if photos were taken, they could be included on your blog.

2) With the action plans, you could make them more reflective. For example: How well did you think you worked?

Alex Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog. These are the things that I picked out which needs correcting:

1) Your blog posts still go onto the two pages, the settings need to be changed so they fit onto the one page.

2) This week's action plan.

House Style Guide

Here is the house style guide in case your team leader loses it. 

Sam Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, this is a list of improvements that you need to make:

- The keynote presentation is missing, give a brief intro about the task and also your thoughts on having completed it.
- Monday's and today's notes/reflections need to be added, also dave's notes?
- Put Nick's weekend homework on here and also the annotated articles you had today

Other than that, good work so far :)

Matt H Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, this is a list of improvements that you need to make:

- You could explain what each of the job roles involve and your thoughts on the role you have.
- More photographic evidence / screengrabs needed
- The keynote presentation is missing - include a brief intro about the task that was set.
- Nick's weekend homework is missing#
- Notes from Thursday, Friday, Monday and today's lessons are missing. Remember to include reflections and also evidence of your work.

Other than that, it's all going good.

Hayden Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, this is a list of improvements that you need to make:

-Your blog is on two pages, you'll need to change the settings so that all blog posts are on the one page.
- At the start of your blog, you could put a brief blog post explaining that this is your blog for the extended project.
- The Final Job roles are also missing - you could also give a brief explanation as to what the job roles involve and also your thoughts and feelings on your role within the project.
- The keynote presentation is missing, put a brief intro about the task.
- Monday's notes, what you did, what you need to do and your thoughts / reflections.
- Same as above, but with today's notes
- You could blog about the group meetings, so it looks more like you are working with the rest of your group, not just on an individual project.

So far, so good :)

Dave Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, this is a list of improvements that you need to make:

- You could put a brief introduction at the start of the blog explaining that this is the extended project.
- Explain what each of the job roles involve, also remove the 'me' from Alex's blog. It shows you have been copying. Put the name next to yours. You could also put your thoughts on the job role you have, and if there was a role you would've preferred, explain why you want it.
- The keynote presentation is missing, also put a brief intro explaining the task you had been set.
- Dave's notes from the previous session
- Today's notes, including reflections
- What you did yesterday and where do you need to go from here?

Tara Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, this is a list of improvements that you need to make: 

- Make sure that all your blog posts fit onto the one page, you can do this on the settings.

- Explain briefly what the job roles involve

- Include a screengrab of your twitter page

- You could give a brief intro to the keynote presentation

- Flatpack design images from Dave's session missing?

- Today's notes

This is good stuff so far with good images / evidence. 

Ash Feedback 1

You have nothing on your blog so far. You need the following:

- An intro explaining this blog is for your extended project.

- The client/ the brief

- The job roles and what they involve, your opinions on that

- Keynote presentation

- Dave's session - the flatpacks, magazine order of roles

- Basic ideas for an article

- Blog post based on Nick's weekend homework - reflections included

- What you did in the lesson - 8/3/10 - what you've done so far and where you intend to go

- The article homework from yesterday and the annotations

Detailed reflections are needed on each of these blog posts, remember to include screengrabs. 

Alex Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, I noticed that you spelt my name wrong on one of the blog posts. It's Mike, not Nike. Please can you change this. Also, you have shown research into some media practitioners we could potentially get in contact with, you could do a blog post explaining background information of the artist and also images of them. Other than that, this is good work. 

Tim Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, I noticed that your blog goes onto two pages. You need to change the settings so that I can view them all on one page. You could explain what all of the job roles involve, ie what the liason guy does. You also need to include the keynote presentation from last week and also give a brief introduction explaining what the task is. Other than that, good work :)

Matt L Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, you could give a brief explanation as to what the job roles involve, ie: liason. You also need to include the notes from last tuesday's lesson, including the flat pack designs. Other than that, its going good.

James Feedback 1

Hello, Having gone through your blog, here is a list of suggestions on what you can do to your blog to make it better.

1) You have explained who the client for the project is, but not what the project is about. You need to explain about the idea of creating a newspaper and what the final outcome should be.

2) Good listing of the roles, however you could explain what each of the roles involve ie: liason has to speak with the client.

3) Upload your keynote presentation that you did earlier onto the blog and give a brief intro about what you did and what you learnt from it.

4) Blog the meeting your group had

5) Blog what you did this afternoon and how your ideas should develop

6) Write a blog regarding this feedback, how you feel about it and the changes you intend to make

Philippa Feedback 1

having gone through your blog, I have made a list of all the things that need improving on it. These need to be changed as soon as possible.

1) You have blogged about the brief, but have not mentioned who the clients are - You need to do this.

2) Good image of the people you nominated for the roles, but some text underneath it explaining why you chose the people you did would be useful.

3) Explain each of the job roles and what they involve :what the teams have to do

4) Upload your keynote presentation and give a brief intro explaining what it is about.

5) Blog the group meetings and what the outcomes were

6) Blog what you did this afternoon

7) Blog what your job role is and what you think to it

8) Blog about the feedback you have received from me and explain and you plan to change etc

Loz Feedback 1

Pretty good work so far, the keynote presentation from last tuesday's lesson is missing. This needs to be added to your blog and also a brief explanation about what this task is and why it was set. Examples of the flatpack from Dave's lesson is also missing. 

Initial questions from the start of the project are missing. You could also explain what each of the job roles involve. Other than that, it's pretty good. :) 

Alie Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, I think you have done good work. The only point I have to make regarding your blog is that when you mention the people in the job roles, you could give a brief explanation as to what the job roles involve. Thanks! 

A Basic Intro

All the blogs for the extended project can be found here and I shall be posting everyone's blog feedback / improvements on here so please check regularly. These need to be done as soon as possible.