Monday, 29 March 2010

Matt H Feedback 2

Having looked through your blog, these are the changes that you will need to make:

1) You need to change the settings on your blog so that all your blog posts can be seen on the one page.

2) Your action plans need to be more detailed. Daily updates would be useful and be reflective. How well do you think you have worked this week? Do you think you could have worked better?

3) Keynote presentation missing. Research into the Newspaper club or the english and media centre. Include screengrabs and images of your research.

4) Include an image of the article that you looked at. An annotated version would also be good.

5) Include the first draft of your article.

6) Include screengrabs of the feedback you recieved. What changes are you going to make from them?

7) Final draft of your article should also be put on the blog. 

8) Dave's session notes should also be included. For example, the flatpack designs etc

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