having gone through your blog, I have made a list of all the things that need improving on it. These need to be changed as soon as possible.
1) You have blogged about the brief, but have not mentioned who the clients are - You need to do this.
2) Good image of the people you nominated for the roles, but some text underneath it explaining why you chose the people you did would be useful.
3) Explain each of the job roles and what they involve :what the teams have to do
4) Upload your keynote presentation and give a brief intro explaining what it is about.
5) Blog the group meetings and what the outcomes were
6) Blog what you did this afternoon
7) Blog what your job role is and what you think to it
8) Blog about the feedback you have received from me and explain and you plan to change etc
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