Dave Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make.

1) The first draft of your article is missing

2) Take Screengrabs of the feedback you recieved on your article and talk about the improvements you need to make for your next draft.

3) The keynote presentation is missing. Research into the newspaper club or the English and Media centre. Include images / screengrabs of your research.

4) Notes on the style guide sessions are also missing.

5) With your action plans, you could include include reflections on how well you have worked during that week and if there is anything you could do to work better the following week.