Dave Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, this is a list of improvements that you need to make:

- You could put a brief introduction at the start of the blog explaining that this is the extended project.
- Explain what each of the job roles involve, also remove the 'me' from Alex's blog. It shows you have been copying. Put the name next to yours. You could also put your thoughts on the job role you have, and if there was a role you would've preferred, explain why you want it.
- The keynote presentation is missing, also put a brief intro explaining the task you had been set.
- Dave's notes from the previous session
- Today's notes, including reflections
- What you did yesterday and where do you need to go from here?