Loz Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make:

1) Your blog post settings need to be changed so they all fit onto one page, not two.

2) The first draft of your article is missing

3) Include annotated screen grabs of the different articles you looked at. Also talk about the different ideas you had for your own article.

4) Include a screengrab of the feedback you recieved on your first draft of the article. Talk about the improvements you need to make.

5) Your keynote presentation is also missing. Research into the newspaper club or the English and Media centre, include screengrabs and images of your research.

6) Action Plans 1,2,3,4 are missing. These need to be added with reflections. How well do you think you worked this week? What could you improve upon for next week?

7) Dave's session notes are also missing. For example, flatpacks etc