Loz Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make:

1) Action plans are missing.
2) Drafts of your article are missing. Screengrabs of your article and or text of your article could be added.
3) Kirk's videos could also be added. - a) The finished newspaper b) Job roles
4) The selection process of what pages appear where. What do you think of the formation of the paper?
5) The keynote presentation from the start of the project is still missing.
6) Both of Dave's session notes are also missing.

Loz Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make:

1) Your blog post settings need to be changed so they all fit onto one page, not two.

2) The first draft of your article is missing

3) Include annotated screen grabs of the different articles you looked at. Also talk about the different ideas you had for your own article.

4) Include a screengrab of the feedback you recieved on your first draft of the article. Talk about the improvements you need to make.

5) Your keynote presentation is also missing. Research into the newspaper club or the English and Media centre, include screengrabs and images of your research.

6) Action Plans 1,2,3,4 are missing. These need to be added with reflections. How well do you think you worked this week? What could you improve upon for next week?

7) Dave's session notes are also missing. For example, flatpacks etc

Loz Feedback 1

Pretty good work so far, the keynote presentation from last tuesday's lesson is missing. This needs to be added to your blog and also a brief explanation about what this task is and why it was set. Examples of the flatpack from Dave's lesson is also missing. 

Initial questions from the start of the project are missing. You could also explain what each of the job roles involve. Other than that, it's pretty good. :)