Tim Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that need to be made:

1) Kirk's videos could be added a) finished newspaper b) job roles
2) Keynote presentation is missing
3) Dave's session notes 1 + 2 are missing

Good work

Tara Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, the only thing I noticed that could be added is Kirk's job role video. There is also a video on vimeo, which could be used for the final flatplan.

Sam Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that need to be made:

1) Keynote presentation missing
2) Dave's session notes 1 + 2
3) The feedback that you recieved on the drafts of your articles
4) Kirk's videos could be added. a) finished newspaper b) job roles

Good stuff =D

Philippa Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, the only thing that needs adding is Kirk's videos. a) the finished newspaper b) job roles videos. Other than that, the settings appear to be messed up, but that should be okay.

Matt L Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, you could talk about your action plan underneath the images. Kirk's job roles video can also be added to your blog.

Matt H Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the improvements that need to be made.

1) Keynote presentation missing
2) Dave's session notes 1+2
3) Kirk's videos can also be added. a) finished newspaper b) job roles

All in all, good work

Loz Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make:

1) Action plans are missing.
2) Drafts of your article are missing. Screengrabs of your article and or text of your article could be added.
3) Kirk's videos could also be added. - a) The finished newspaper b) Job roles
4) The selection process of what pages appear where. What do you think of the formation of the paper?
5) The keynote presentation from the start of the project is still missing.
6) Both of Dave's session notes are also missing.

Kirk Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes / improvements that you need to make.

1) All blog posts need to be on the one page. This can be changed in the settings.
2) Two weeks of action plans are missing.

All in all, good work.

Locating Kirk's Videos

In order to find Kirk's videos, they can be found on the cmdiploma account on youtube. From there, they can be embedded onto the blogs.

However, this is Kirk's video, so no other member of the class can say they helped to make the video.

These are the videos.







This is the flatplanning video that can be found on vimeo. http://www.vimeo.com/10868901

Flat Planning (Extended project) from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

Here is a video / slide show along with the audio from the final flat planning session for our extended project (Newspaper - A2 media exam)



Audio recorded by: Kirk



Photos taken by: Kirk



Video by: Kirk

James Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, there is only one improvement that needs to be made to your blog. It will be good if you could include Kirk's videos. a) Finished newspaper b) Job roles video. All in all, good work.=]

Hayden Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the things that need adding to your blog. This needs to be done as quickly as possible.

1) Your final evaluation task is missing.
2) Your action plans / Dave's session notes are missing.
3) Include your final article that got printed into the newspaper.
4) Also, put Kirk's videos on your blog. a) Finished newspaper, b) Job roles video

All in all, good work.

Dave Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make to it.

1) Improvements from the last set of feedback need to be added.
2) Final evaluation task is missing
3) Use Kirk's videos on your blog - a) Finished newspaper b) job roles video

All in all, good work

Ash Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, here is a list of things that need to be changed or improved:

1) Your final evaluation is missing.
2) All the previous feedback need to put on the blog, including the work.
3) Use Kirk's videos on the blog - a) finished newspaper b) the job roles
4) You could include more images. These can be found on Tara's flickr account that she set up.

Thanks =]

Alie Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the things that could be improved / added:

1) Your final evaluation task is missing?
2) You could also use Kirk's videos. a) the finished newspaper - b) the job role video

All in all, good work =]

Alex Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the things that I picked out from it.

1) Not all the blog posts fit onto the one page.
2) You could include Kirk's videos. - a) The finished newspaper, b) Job role video

All in all, good work =]