James Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, there is only one improvement that needs to be made to your blog. It will be good if you could include Kirk's videos. a) Finished newspaper b) Job roles video. All in all, good work.=]

James Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you need to make:

1) Your keynote presentation is missing. Research the newspaper club or the english and media centre, include images and screengrabs of your research.

2) The assigned roles blog post should be changed. It shows you have been copying from other people's blogs. eg: You did not write an article with Matt. Tara did.

3) Action plans 2,3,4 are missing. Be reflective at the end of each week, how well do you think you worked? Could you have worked better?

House Style Guide

Here is the house style guide in case your team leader loses it. 

James Feedback 1

Hello, Having gone through your blog, here is a list of suggestions on what you can do to your blog to make it better.

1) You have explained who the client for the project is, but not what the project is about. You need to explain about the idea of creating a newspaper and what the final outcome should be.

2) Good listing of the roles, however you could explain what each of the roles involve ie: liason has to speak with the client.

3) Upload your keynote presentation that you did earlier onto the blog and give a brief intro about what you did and what you learnt from it.

4) Blog the meeting your group had

5) Blog what you did this afternoon and how your ideas should develop

6) Write a blog regarding this feedback, how you feel about it and the changes you intend to make