James Feedback 1

Hello, Having gone through your blog, here is a list of suggestions on what you can do to your blog to make it better.

1) You have explained who the client for the project is, but not what the project is about. You need to explain about the idea of creating a newspaper and what the final outcome should be.

2) Good listing of the roles, however you could explain what each of the roles involve ie: liason has to speak with the client.

3) Upload your keynote presentation that you did earlier onto the blog and give a brief intro about what you did and what you learnt from it.

4) Blog the meeting your group had

5) Blog what you did this afternoon and how your ideas should develop

6) Write a blog regarding this feedback, how you feel about it and the changes you intend to make