Matt H Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, these are the improvements that need to be made.

1) Keynote presentation missing
2) Dave's session notes 1+2
3) Kirk's videos can also be added. a) finished newspaper b) job roles

All in all, good work

Matt H Feedback 2

Having looked through your blog, these are the changes that you will need to make:

1) You need to change the settings on your blog so that all your blog posts can be seen on the one page.

2) Your action plans need to be more detailed. Daily updates would be useful and be reflective. How well do you think you have worked this week? Do you think you could have worked better?

3) Keynote presentation missing. Research into the Newspaper club or the english and media centre. Include screengrabs and images of your research.

4) Include an image of the article that you looked at. An annotated version would also be good.

5) Include the first draft of your article.

6) Include screengrabs of the feedback you recieved. What changes are you going to make from them?

7) Final draft of your article should also be put on the blog. 

8) Dave's session notes should also be included. For example, the flatpack designs etc

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Matt H Feedback 1

Having gone through your blog, this is a list of improvements that you need to make:

- You could explain what each of the job roles involve and your thoughts on the role you have.
- More photographic evidence / screengrabs needed
- The keynote presentation is missing - include a brief intro about the task that was set.
- Nick's weekend homework is missing#
- Notes from Thursday, Friday, Monday and today's lessons are missing. Remember to include reflections and also evidence of your work.

Other than that, it's all going good.