Philippa Feedback 3

Having gone through your blog, the only thing that needs adding is Kirk's videos. a) the finished newspaper b) job roles videos. Other than that, the settings appear to be messed up, but that should be okay.

Philippa Feedback 2

Having gone through your blog, these are the changes that you should make:

1) The settings need to be changed so that all your blog posts fit on the one page.

2) You should be more reflective in your action plans. How well do you think you worked this week? Are there any improvements you think you could make when working next week? 

House Style Guide

Here is the house style guide in case your team leader loses it. 

Philippa Feedback 1

having gone through your blog, I have made a list of all the things that need improving on it. These need to be changed as soon as possible.

1) You have blogged about the brief, but have not mentioned who the clients are - You need to do this.

2) Good image of the people you nominated for the roles, but some text underneath it explaining why you chose the people you did would be useful.

3) Explain each of the job roles and what they involve :what the teams have to do

4) Upload your keynote presentation and give a brief intro explaining what it is about.

5) Blog the group meetings and what the outcomes were

6) Blog what you did this afternoon

7) Blog what your job role is and what you think to it

8) Blog about the feedback you have received from me and explain and you plan to change etc